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Ultimate Angel Anime~uncompleted!
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This is an anime that i created. I'm not done, but i hope you like it. ^-^
Ultimate Angel

Momoka Arizumi, a 13 year old, was born with the gift of the angels that helds the power of the golden heart. She didn't know her power until she met Maru, a gaurdian angel but in dog/bunny form. As she battles a demon, she starts to notice her true angel power. As a journey to save earth and heaven, join Momoka and her 4 other angel friends to battle and take on adventures of heaven.

Episode 1 of Ultimate Angel Saga: I'm An Angel?!

Heaven.....what is heaven? heaven is a wonderful place of angels and peace. The clouds....The happily dancing angels..... what peace......Soon after, dark clouds were sawrming. Cries of angels. Demons flying..... Peace broken in halfs.... angels dying....The 2 gaurdian angels, Princess Runo And maru, set a half guiding the other angels to safety.... as a new demon has tooken over..... "Give me.... THE GOLDEN HEART!" Demon runo shouted to the 2 gaurdians as if she was their ruler for eternity. "We will never give it to you!" Princess Runo said as she used the last of her golden heart power to banish Demon Runo. "You'll regret this!" The last thing Demon Runo said. As everything turned to dust....Princess runo and maru didn't know what to do. "Either I have to destroy the heart or give it to a mortal." She said. "But you can't do that! You will use up too much power!' Maru said. "I must do it for my people." Princess Runo said as she opened a portal to earth and gives the golden heart to a new born baby. "Take care of this well. Soon, I will meet you young one." Princess runo said softly. "Maru, please take care of these angels. they might be humans, but they have something in their heart that is angelic." Princess Runo said. Maru Nodded as he transported to planet, earth. As he watch the last of princess Runo's soul fading away......

Osaka, Japan. You hear the noises of little kids running and shouting. 8:00 A.M. Momoka arizumi is a heavy sleeper. As she had a horrible nightmare. "Huh? W-where am I?" She asked. "Is there anyone here?!" she shouted as she was in a dark cold room. "Momoka.....Momoka.." As a dark voice calling her name. "W-who's there!?" She said. As she tripped on a green twig as it kept on grabbing her foot. As she scream and nobody heared her voice. 'Save me please somebody!!" She shouted as tears came down her cheeks. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!" Momoka screamed as she woke up out of bed and noticed the time. 'Oh man! I been sleeping up late! What do i do if my mom finds out! Oh nooo!!" She paniced. As she ranned into the mirror, pull out her drawer, and brought out her 2 pink bows. She scrambled it into her hair but they feel off. "AHH!!!!! WHAT DO I DO? My MOM WILL BE LIKE, MOMOKA HOW COME YOU HAVEN"T WOKEN UP YET?!!! Oh mama! I'm so sorry! I didn't know-" As her mom kicked the door and shouted, "MOMOKA!! WHERE ARE YOU?!!!" Momoka was shocked and depressed since she got in trouble not getting dressed yet. as momoka made a sad face as she and her mom looked in the mirror in the last year of Konohai middle school uniform. As her mother got her lucky bows and putted them into her hair. "Ah! Don't you look so cute! Cute for that Ryouto-boy you like!" she said. Momoka's face got tomato red. 'Mom! Didn't we agree were not suppose to say his name in this house?" Momoka said. "well you been crushing on him since you were 8. Don't you think it's time tell him how you feel?" Her mother said. Momoka made a long face. she said in her mind, 'yeah... But I guess I just don't know how to do that stuff yet...."

Have any questions about the anime? Just ask me!Plz post what you think. ^-^

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You should start an intro for anime as the character talking about her self and scenes with her doing her favorite hobbies. This technically jumps to the story. Introduce each character piece by piece. Also, the character summary is usually in the back of the manga, if it's a manga, and in the beginning of the animated series in a narrative form from the character.

Also, the first paragraph about the "character" is 50% spoiler. We don't want to know what she's destined for, or who and how many people she'll team up with. The intro should be only about the character.
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harajukukiki wrote:
You should start an intro for anime as the character talking about her self and scenes with her doing her favorite hobbies. This technically jumps to the story. Introduce each character piece by piece. Also, the character summary is usually in the back of the manga, if it's a manga, and in the beginning of the animated series in a narrative form from the character.

Also, the first paragraph about the "character" is 50% spoiler. We don't want to know what she's destined for, or who and how many people she'll team up with. The intro should be only about the character.

Oh okay, thx!

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